Nice rythem.
When I heard the intro of the song, I was "Huh? Ice Cavern? lol". I've been a Zelda freak, so some rythems are easy to compare to it. :P
Intro: the first instrument started playing with a good calming start. However, I suggest the bell to be toned in a slightly lower pitch and heavier. The one you used is too light and high-pitched. The bell-thing at 0:14 could also use some lower-pitching, too. I noticed that the power was weak when the instruments at 0:30 were coming. Maybe it would be good to power-up the drums, and make the electric guitar stronger. The guitar that was playing in the background could also use some powering up. The bell playing individual notes at 1:30 should be a bit heavier and lower-pitched, then it would sound good. The instrument at 2:10 started a bit too late, and it didn't sound in total symphasy with itself in my ears, so maybe you could check and re-arrange its time spaces. (see if the gaps before each note is the same as supposed).
Middle: the last issue mentioned in "intro" still lasts here, but there's no need to repeat all that. What I've noticed here is the electric guitar. It needs more power (tune it up). The drums also could use some additional power. The rythem was nice, but the volume is the only problem.
End: the bell appears here, same with the beginning, and I've already mentioned to let it be lower-pitched and heavier. And the power of the electric guitar and drums should be stronger. The point at 5:12 was quite too sudden, since it first muted entirely, and then played half a second later. You should re-arrange that space closer to eachother.
Whole song: could use some reverb, make it echo a bit.
So, the major improvements needed:
--the pitch of the bells (minus one point)
--the volume of various instruments, especially the volume of the electric guitar and the drums. (minus one point)
--add some reverb, echoing effects to make it sound a bit cleaner and smooth than usual (not extracting points)
Overall, a 8/10 and a 4/5. Good work on this.
~The Liberaten
~The Review Request Club
--grammar and spelling not revised.