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This is quite a good and funny flash movie.

This Minecraft-based flash has really shoved some entertainment into my thoughts. This is something that's worthy enough of a series. The ending? Hilarious!

Animation/Art: 5 stars
The accuracy, colors, forms are all beautifully drawn and animated. The way the minecraft characters are shown and move...just top-notch! There's no way to give critisism on art so close to perfection.

Audio/Voice: 4.5 stars
Unfortunately, there is a flaw in the audio. First, when the administrator in the Minecraft server says 'There!', the audio clips and desorts. In other words, the audio 'crashes' when he says the word. It hurts my ears a bit when I've got the headphones on a rather high volume. You might want to re-record that section if you want to eliminate this flaw.

Plot: 4.5 stars
The animation was overall funny, especially in the end, but it's quite short in my opinion. If you don't feel bothered, maybe you should stretch the plot by around twice the original lenght and add some additional humor and/or storyline. It's only beneficial if you do it right. Besides, the file size here says 1.5 MB, thus it doesn't hurt to extend the story until it hits 4MB, right?

Overall, 4.5 stars out of 5. Great animation, but needs some fixing on the voice clip and perhaps an extension of the plot.

~C23

Hmmm...entertaining.

Art/Ammation: 3 stars.
Movement and forms are smooth, which are the good parts of this animation. However, the character movement (again) was unrealistic. Let their legs move. The bed could have used a flash-made bed. Also, the sword fighting event was way too simple. The enemies could have used some splattered blood when struck. The text could use some smoothing when they appeared, and could have zoomed-out a bit.

Voice/Music: 4 stars
The music was nice, but Brutes' voice could use some re-arrangement. His sentances seem to collapse a big (he says a sentance and then a sudden unrealistic stop). His voice could also use some smoothing. The rest was good; fighting effects, music, all good.

Plot: 2 stars.
This episode is not extremely entertaining. Very short, so not much of a good show to see. It's appretiated to add episodes into this work. Viewers always like long episodes instead of multiple short stories.

MistyE responds:

Thanks for the review!

Sorry, not top, but improvement could make this flash better.

Animation: 3 stars.
The animation was basic, and good, but the character movement was kinda out-of-place, as I've mentioned before in the other episodes. When the characters move, make them move their legs, not bunny-hopping; this makes this flash a bit unrealistic. The character forms were smooth. Some objects, such as the bed that Drake was sleeping on, was from the real world. You could use a flash-made bed. Also, mouth synthing was bad (as I've mentioned in the other episodes). Use some of your time to let them play in good place.

Voice: 1 star.
Very abrupt. As Sectus has mentioned, the voices seem rough. (Did you use a pro-mic? A pro mic could help solve the problem) Also, did you tried my advice of standing a bit far away from the mic to prevent wind hitting the mic? The voices are the ONLY reason for a bad score.

Plot: 4 stars.
Very good with the plot, but could be longer (put more episodes in one single big episode). I believe the episodes were too short. However, I like your ideas on this, it keeps building up the rising plot. Even though it suddenly skipped areas. (lol, my sense of humor has messed up this week)

Overall: 3 stars, so a vote of 3. I hope there could be some improvement on the series.

Haggard and Sectus are right, on their points. Also use their info for improvement.

--The Liberaten
--The Review Request Club

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Great Game!

The only thing why it doesn't get a 10 is because the maps of the earth weren't accurate (Argentina and Chile was reffered as "Argentina", China, Loas, Vietnam and Thailand was reffered as "China) you might want to reffer the region as another name (South America, Southeast Asia).

Good game!

I gotta admit, the music, voices and the plot were all good.
9/10

The graphics weren't really bad, either.
7/10

So conclusion: 8/10. But seriously, I liked this game, even though I just had to watch the screen and hold spacebar.

Great game

Good to test your brain. Well, maybe you could add medals to this one. :)

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Very catchy, I can easily see this track in a best football "something" youtube compilation. First 25 seconds of the track sound a bit clippy but nice work for the rest!

X3LL3N responds:

Thanks a lot, I appreciate that ! :)
Comments mean a lot to me to be honest

By the way, gg for being in the Popular audios as well

Damn, love the atmosphere you create with this track. Sick beats throughout, the bass is on point and feeds the ears with goodness, especially in the second half of the track. Mooi gedaan man!

Stunning and beautiful. Listening to this puts my heart at ease.

FleroviumWubz responds:

Ayy, exactly what I want to archieve with my music <3
Thanks a lot for your comment, KrisKrosNL!

~ Flerovium

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Great art-work you've done here. I'm shitty at art, thus here's a review:

So yeah, let's get to the good sides first. First of all, I actually like the effect you've used here (some sort of black and white). As opposed to your other drawings, this one includes much more background. Second thing is the statue and the wings (how the fuck did you manage to make both sides almost identical?). Last of all, the 'stars' in the sky. =P

However, this doesn't make your drawing perfect. First I see a bit of non-full lines...thus in my opinion you should make all the white lines a bit more in depth (ha ha, my eye-sight sucks). Another is the guy with the blade: his back seems quite messy since the figure of the guy seems to get mixed by the building behind. Last of all: inaccurate lines. The door at the bottom-left corner, for example, has unbalanced lines (get it?). The same goes for the window above the door and the few windows at the right side of the pic.

Overall, 3.5/5. Nice try on the effect and creativity, but not accurate enough to become a masterpiece. Good luck on your future projects!

~C23

MaartenC responds:

The dude's back is messy, because of the cloak he's wearing.
Other than that, you're right, the buildings need a lot of attention indeed.

Thanks for the review!

It's well done with effort, but there are a few massive cons.

First I'll say that you've done quite well (much better than I can) in (re)drawing this cartoon-ish human(?). The most basic of skills seem to have been used here and the eyes and forms appear accurate. There's little need to change accuracy of the shape as this one is already pro-like.

However, I instantly find an immediate con: the lack of background. What I mean by this is that the background is only white, and there's nothing special going on in the background. If you (at least) add a clear night sky behind the character then the drawing would appear much more 'full'. Adding at least a background can upper your overall score from the majority.

Another con: no color. I already know your situation atm as you've told me before, but you might want to filter in colors to the pic. Some people, including people that dislike black-white sketches, might provide low scores to non-colored pics, thus I recommend you to use some coloring material (I dunno, crayons?).

Next: no nose? Is the character supposed to have NO nose? I don't know the original character thus I can't rate this. However, I convince you to add a nose.

Last, shadowing on the cat appears foul as a section is darker than the other. I don't know if it's meant to be like that, but try to do the shadowing with the same pencil, method, etc. Don't alter methods as this can ruin your shadowing effort.

Overall: 2/5 stars. Not your best IMO,but not the worst. I believe you shouldn't rush the project. Obtain inspiration before you draw it; don't force yourself.

~C23

MaartenC responds:

Actually, she's supposed to lack a nose in this picture, since in the series, it's quite a 'wut' moment. You know, anime is strange like that :P

I did add some small color in the drawing, though it's very subtle (her hair). I will keep doing that, but I'll add a little bit more.

The cat is by the way supposed to be black, the darker section was an unfortunate mistake with the pen :(

Also, I'll add a background; very good idea.

Thanks for the elaborate review, I'll take my time for the next one.

I have zero idea who Fluttershy is, so it might be a bit hard to review this. (I don't watch MLP) -_-

The first thing I noticed is that the paper is dirty of lead.* I don't know whether it's supposed to be like this or not, but it would be suggested to clean the paper to make it look clean as a new piece of art.

Second thing, the forms do not appear as a completed one. Rather, it appears as sketch and it would be considered to re-draw this until the lines of the hair face, mouth, teeth and eyes appear smooth.

Third thing, no color. Color is a major source for art. This is just black-white, and adding colors would give some life into this piece.

As an addition, you could add a background to this or different types of symbols to show what that (pony?) is actually doing in the pic.

The nose and ear seem good, so there's no need to change that.

Overall, 1.5 stars. Cleaning the paper is the first thing to do, and then you work on the forms.

--The Liberaten
--The Review Request Club

* "dirty by lead" is meant that the paper is dirty because of a pencil. If you used an eraser, some source of the pencil will stick on to the paper. In this case, NEVER go first-time hard-pressing on the paper. To fix this, do what Knuckstrike mentioned about the drawing with pencil.

Sectus responds:

I appreciate the review, and thank you for your time.

The lead was meant to look like that, I wanted to give it a general unhealthy, dirty look so I tried to smudge the pencil around the teeth to make it look like stains on her teeth from the smoking.

I know it doesn't look very professional, but obviously I am just starting out on all of this, and trust me, I am practicing and improving myself every day.

I would like to eventually start coloring my art, but I haven't really looked into it as of recent. Perhaps I will add color into some of my newer pieces.

I never really thought about adding a background in this. I just wanted to focus on the character itself rather than adding background objects to be over concerned with.

Again, thank you for the review. It is appreciated.

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